In thinking about how not everyone celebrates the same holidays, or even appreciates the same traditions or celebrations or holidays, the prompt over at Big Tent Poetry was to create a festival, holiday or annual celebration, or to write the anti- of any of them — real or imagined — as a poem.Since I could really use a holiday -- just to rest, read, and write poetry -- I decided to think about holiday in the "vacation" sense of the word. Then I got to thinking how if every day was a holiday, we might not appreciate it. (Although I would really like to test this out!) Then I decided to twist my own thought process and turn it inside out. And I arrived at the following poem, albeit rough and needing some tweaking . . .
inside-out day
the seams are facing out
in every possible place
we're racing and fasting
and there's no smile on my face
we go to work today
for a change from our leisure
the alarm clock's chime is sweet
wish we had this daily pressure
there'll be no salty breezes
nor lakeside sunny naps
no reading or relaxation
and definitely no snacks
seems we only appreciate stress
because it is so very foreign
can't wait til next year
to ring in this obligation
the fabric always seems finer on the inside-out
Copyright © 2011 Nan P.
11 comments:
This took my breath away with it's lateral thinking. As a fully-occupied retired old bat, I have no need for holidays, nor yet for inside out holidays. Your poem made me chuckle!
nan, I like your take on the prompt.
Pamela
Well that's a change of pace! Nice take, well written.
An upside down look at work—works. Now I must write some critiques and a new assignment. Ah—I think I shall take your poem's route and head to the coffee house for lunch and a latte.
Yes, I really enjoyed the way you turned it inside out! I might have to try that approach with a few things this week!
Inside out - a perceptive take!
I do like the notion of an inside-out day. Enforced revelation of what lurks at the interior!
Very inventive! I enjoyed that.
I like this idea A LOT! *smile*
Very creative. Really liked this, especially the idea of ringing in an obligation. It's all in the perspective, isn't it?
What a fun day. Reminds me of when I taught second grade. We had "backwards day" the last week of school. They loved it.
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