I struggled with this one. A couple things have been getting me down lately, but it seems ungrateful to whine about them. The weather has been severe, but I acknowledge that it is beautiful. I've had a rotten cold, but I am feeling better, and I certainly didn't have anything serious. My job is a giant ball of stress these days, and it certainly saps my creative energies, but I am lucky to have a good job. So what to write about?
I decided to pick something that had me feeling hopeless just a few of weeks ago, and already, we are hopeful as we anticipate the path to recovery. I am overjoyed.
toast
recently, she asked for toast
and just 4 weeks ago
that wouldn't have been
eventful at all
now the request
for crispy, heated slices of bread
gives me cause
to lift my voice in cheer
righteousness is restored
when a hatemonger's bullet can go
through the speech center
of a person's brain
and the voice of a patriot
is regained.
Copyright © 2011 Nan P.
*With this little poem, I am sending out a positive affirmation that with hard work, a full recovery for Rep. Gabrielle Giffords is possible.
16 comments:
toast = hope, love it! spring is around the corner, the stress at work is only there 'cause we let it, and chicken soup is great for colds... have it with toast!
This is so lovely! I raise my glass!
Thanks for your comment on my blog.
Take care and keep smiling. =*
Great message of hope! May that full recovery be within her reach.
Love this toast to a needed and necessary voice recovered.
Elizabeth
Nan, I love this poem. That amount of hate in this world is astounding. May Gabrielle have a full recovery.
Pamela
What a nice tribute... a true source of hope and joy for all!
~laurie
Hope keeps us going. Let it be...
lined up...
Very nice, Nan. Gave me chills!
That was excellent. Thanks!
Heartwarming.
When I heard that on the news, it was such a warm detail, I couldn't help but smile.
A simple request, a huge step! Nicely done!
That was beautiful, Nan. Love it!
All the best
Marinela x
Righteousness restored - yes! Wonderful poem.
Warm and toasty is a breakthrough. Nice way of developing the voice..
I like the way you used the contrast between a simple thing like asking for toast and the trauma this person went through to show us the story. So few words, and you told me so much. Thank you.
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