Wednesday, July 25, 2012

adoration


in the church organ loft
adoration shines
and not just for God

Copyright © 2012 Nan P.


We Write Poems asked us to write a poem in 12 words. Process notes: The original instructions said to"count fingers plus two," and instructed us that this process was obviously about brevity -- and breathing in and breathing out. The combination of fingers plus the moment of breathing in and breathing out brought me back to a moment of my childhood. I used to ride my bike to church by myself so that I could climb the long, winding stairs into the church loft at St. Mary's Church to watch my grandfather play the organ for mass. I would take part in mass, but I was really there to hang out with my grandpa. I adored him.

6 comments:

Hannah said...

Oh, Nan...and now I have tears in my eyes for your special grandfather moment...how very precious are your memories.

How cool that we both wrote of grandparents!!! :)!

Elizabeth said...

Sweet, wonderful memories of a special person and the meaning they have in our lives. Also really enjoyed your notes and the backstory.

Elizabeth

Anonymous said...

I really love this one. Well done.

flaubert said...

That is beautiful and tender, nan.

Pamela

irene said...

So so sweet a memory. You brought us there.

Jules said...

While I think all places of worship are unique and special - it is indeed the people too that help these buildings make glorious music. Glad you were able to capture this wonderful memory to share with us.
Thanks for your visit.