like gravity, the gentle refrain
pulled her to the center
of her heart opening
where love and humility dwell
Copyright ©
2012 Nan P.
[This micro-poem is loosely written for The Sunday Whirl, where I only used three of the thirteen words. The words were: humility, trigger, swells, relishes, flicks, crack, grittle,
chain, spray, gravity, plant, claim, refrain] Image found via Google Images.
17 comments:
Love that gentle refrain...it is so like that the ebb and flow of the drawing Source. Well penned!
Micro poem but macro message! Love it!!
What a beautiful mantra it is too. Yes, with a huge message.
gorgeously spiritual, nan.
and the pic. is mesmerizing.
You caught the essence of a mantra perfectly. Annette at http://hoofprintsinmygarden.wordpress.com/2012/07/15/this-is-what-homeless-looks-like/
A mantra to live by, breathe in and exhale lovingly,
Elizabeth
gorgeous and insightful
to me your words WERE a mantra....beautifully written
nan, you may have only used three words, but you have created a beautiful statement here.
Pamela
This is one of those poems where it pays to get in early, before everyone has commented! I agree with the sentiments and add that the movement involved for us as readers, matches the breathing in and out, because of the words you chose and the imagery formed.
Just magnificent!! As others have said, a mantra to live by!
Your well-chosen words did the deed. A beautiful write!
Nan-you chose the three perfect words.
Its length didn't diminish any of the meaning. Great use of those three words.
The poem and the image are both mesmerizing.
Powerful choice of words with a lovely flow.
Humility and love grounded by gravity. A gentle tug, well wordled.
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