How is it that you can be whole again?
Well, you will just have to learn that for yourself.
something about the journey
trudging a third of a mile
through the forest, to the lake
clear as glass
with all your necessaries
for three days
towed in the aluminum canoe
in your hand and his
makes you wonder
if it is all worth it –
sweat beading at your temples
arms aching, stigmata blister
forming
on your palm
something about setting up
your little dwelling,
knowing it is
temporary, yet getting it
just right and in place and safe
so that after the work is done
you can lie on the sun-warmed rock
at water’s edge
with the book you haven’t opened
and spot the kingfisher
and the magnificent osprey,
heavy with fish, pulled low near
water’s surface and flying
down the center of the lake to
the tall, dead tree at the point
where it will lift, up, up, up
with weighted feast to enjoy
at the end of the strenuous flight
something about the wilderness preserve
with no motors, no visible people,
the bears from whom you hoist your food
and little cook stoves for boiling water
and clear, cold lake in which to swim
breathing the pine needle air
and taking in the sky above
and soft forest earth below
braves you, after three days, and
you are refreshed and replenished
and even with a little hole in your heart
that may never go away,
you are and will always be
whole.
Copyright
© 2012 Nan P.
[This was written for We Write Poems. We were asked to : "write a poem without our shoes and socks, a study in bare feet... to find a favorite spot, maybe one that evokes deep memory or inspires imagination, then take off your shoes and socks and be reminded… of what?" This will also be posted over at Poets United, when the next Poetry Pantry goes live.]
[This was written for We Write Poems. We were asked to : "write a poem without our shoes and socks, a study in bare feet... to find a favorite spot, maybe one that evokes deep memory or inspires imagination, then take off your shoes and socks and be reminded… of what?" This will also be posted over at Poets United, when the next Poetry Pantry goes live.]
8 comments:
I don't think 'Late' is in internet vocabulary...at least not for me. This reminds me of two places, one a cold lake in Connecticut - cold even in the summer. And a little cold pool below a waterfall in Maui. I've dipped in both. Always hard to get in cold water - then your body adjusts to the numbness and you feel apart of the water...Thanks for taking me back there...
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Oh, my goodness, Nan. This makes my heart hungry for it.
"at water’s edge
with the book you haven’t opened
and spot the kingfisher
and the magnificent osprey,
heavy with fish, pulled low near
water’s surface and flying
down the center of the lake to
the tall, dead tree at the point
where it will lift, up, up, up
with weighted feast to enjoy
at the end of the strenuous flight"
and more...such beautiful, meaning ful writing.
Wow Nan, this is breathtaking and restores my soul just reading it.
Wow, you have brought this scene, this experience, to life. Loved the wonderful details you shared that made me feel as if I was right IN this poem. And the ending...."you are and will always be whole" made my heart take a leap. Beautiful, Nan.
Great poem... I'm encouraged by the knowledge that even though you may have a hole in your heart that will never quite go away, you can still be whole. A wonderful and true paradox... helps us to gain a different perspective about experiences we fear have left us less... we truly are more when we accept it all... celebrate everything. It's all a part of who we are, is it not?
You described this remembered experience so intensely that you took me there. I saw and felt it all, and came away so much the richer for it.
Such a descriptive write --not just about the location, but about the finding of peace-lovely!
You snapped a photo so clear, I can see the lake, feel the warm rock, see the osprey flying the middle of the lake to the dead tree, the ending powerful, "replenished...even with a little hole in your heart you are and will always be whole.: Beautiful, I will remember this line, my new mantra. Thank you.
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