acquiescence
I said,
there seems to be a barrier
between your mind and your soul
with sweet truth hiding like a diamond
inside a tough pleat in the armor
around your heart
you said,
love is in the details
and you can't help it
if I have mood swings
and my tears flow
like silent gushing waterfalls
then, I figure out the power
of your defense again
when you strap the issue
onto me and zip up tight –
suspending
any more inquiry
I said, I guess
you and I are not unified whole
we are separate units –
complete
but part of something
more complex© nan, 2014
6 comments:
I like the use of dialogue..could be between two separate people or an internal realisation..either way two parts often do make a whole
Nan, I like your conversational poem, too. Well wordled and a pleasure to read.
The way you used the words works so well.. nothing strained with them at all.
Yes, this was a great dialogue to read. "Sweet truth hiding like a diamond" was a delight.
Yeah, love this conversational piece.
Oh Nan, the opening to your dialogue makes me want more, and you don't disappoint. Your armored pleat is perfect.
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