quietly I hum along thinking
almost meditating
on the idea of a subtle tint
rose colored light
seeping through
the tip of my mind
integral to the peace
integral to learning the answer
integral to navigating the map
this is the last chance
again
to blast through
staid, staid convention
a tincture for ebullience
softly, softly, synchronizing
my breathing with the
off beats of the drums
spontaneous
pranayama
Copyright © 2013 Nan P.
[Wordle words: think, tint, synchronize, softly, tip, integral, map, blast, chance, tincture, and answer. Written for The Sunday Whirl... maybe the last poem here at JPP for 2013. Also posted over at Poets United.
19 comments:
wonderful poem... love the theme spontaneous moments can be good for the soul...
Those ah-hah moments don't come often, but when they do are certainly worth the wait and time between them,
Elizabeth
Oh, so lovely, Nan. You play well with sounds. That second stanza is beautifully gentle.
Lovely indeed!
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didn't take part in today's wordle; still i'm inviting you to stop by my blog and share a link at the 'Twelve Days of Christmas' celebration
much love...
This sounds like a good, peaceful moment!
Spontaneity is always a delight, nan. Lovely poem. Happy New Year to you and yours.
Pamela
LOVE your use of repetition here.
A clam, gentle feel while reading this.
A good moment indeed ~ Happy New Year to you ~
We all need good moments every now and again!
Fantastic, Nan! Loved every line.
It is always good to have your own secret way to unwind, relax and restore the harmony of of you life. Still trying to find mine!
Enjoyed your poem. I like the idea of the off beats of the drum. Well done.
nice thoughts..i like the placidity
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Nice one. The repetition is very effective. I had to look up pranayama - and I could really do with some of that energy and life force!
Do you know I love this, but am not sure why, or maybe can't articulate it. Forgive me.
Ciao
Pea.
I didn't even notice that it was a wordle until after I read it and looked around. Very well done!
Resonates with me :)
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